George and Lennie

10/4/2013

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                                                                                             George and Lennie
                                                                  Lennie would not survive without George:

Taking care of yourself is a really difficult job.  If you are someone named Lennie it is an even more difficult job. Lennie is an irresponsible child. He always makes the wrong decisions and needs someone to take care of him. In Weed, Lennie saw a girl wearing a beautiful dress. He started to touch the dress, then grab it. The little girl thought that Lennie was rapping her so she started to yell. Because of that he got kicked out from Weed. Good thing that George came with him because he wouldn’t survive as well without him. George feeds him and gives him good advice. Lennie can’t even get wood by himself without making a stupid mistake. In every page of the book it shows that he can’t survive without George.



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Ms. D
10/18/2013 02:50:53 am

This has some good ideas, but you need to proofread carefully for clarity in your sentences and flow. Make sure you use transition words to make your paragraphs flow. Good job.

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